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Trippin roller. Total different style. Try to take a listen...

eckhart
eckhart
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I like the bass melody. but it just keeps on going... and i'd use another kick... and i dont like the idea of that stab in the last minute

Prinzjah
Prinzjah
Electrobel Veteran

nice one. like that bass very much, but as eckhart says it just keeps on going, maybe some variation in beats would be nice ans add a synth or something that fits the bass . And that part @4min35sec is nice but i would love it if you use it earlier in the song. if you like you can send me your patterns on msn cause i have some good ideas for this track grtz

Swift
Swift
Electrobel Veteran

Thanks for the comments :D pRinse --> Will make a zip tonight, you will receive it tomorrow.

QZN
QZN
Electrobel Veteran

First I thank you for your comments man! I will try to help you, I'm just hearing to your last track... The bass melody and its sound is good, beginning with the bass is not common.. I like the drum but you have to boost it and more with the kick (maybe not only with the low frequency) and make 2 or 3 more drum loop/breaks...more variations. After the first break & the voice, my advice will be to reinforce the drum loop with a different loop on it or with congas.. I like the idea of the stab, my point of view it has to begin very sooner and to be more repetitive with small subtitle variation that get progressive... anyway I like very much all the sounds used , just fine tune your miwdown ;-) PEACE

mik
mik
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Well I think there are some things that really need to be taken care of in this track : - The sub is annoying, ok for some minutes but use some fx on it, distort and whatnot to make it less repetitive. - Drums need more power. The snare doesnt hits enough and the kick is too flat -1.15 after the voice sample, there are like 3 seconds blank.. you should really get rid of it or create way more tension before otherwise it just sounds like a blank with no purpose in it, and it kills the flow of the tracks. -Introduce the stabs like a decade before!!!!!!! Way too late, you could really make the overal more interesting should you put these before. Keep up with the work mate!

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