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i've worked quite a while on it. it still isn't finished, i was hoping to get some constructive comments on this one (: i tried to create a massive attack atmo. i think that worked out. edit: added some minor thingy's, changed a few envelopes. left a few thingy's out. quite happy with the result now but i know the mix still ain't wonderfull. i wanted to sing but after a few hours of trying i bailed. enjoy!

Omyiga
Omyiga
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don't know exactly what you have changed, but I definietly enjoyed it more; cool solo at the end + pro opgenomen gitaren. Tis mss wel gelijk da teebo zegt, it gets pretty deep around 2:00, this mocht van mij nog eens komen opt einde; perhaps zo vree plots een ontploffingske opt einde, me distortion guitars and heavy drums with lots of cymbals na uw afbouw. Butttt those are just ideas and this is already pretty nice he;p

omihoshbin
omihoshbin
Electrobel Veteran

powerfull, schoon maat!, realyrealylikeit

Rag
Rag
Electrobel Veteran

yeah nice, needs some work i think (but i can't talk 'cause all my songs are somehow unfinished) but very nice, would change the drums and work on some more tension maybe

teebo
teebo
Electrobel Veteran

nice atmo, nice guitars, nice track. But i think it just misses some extra elements/melo's near the end. you should make it longer and harder, it doesn't really break los completely. But this song has potential and a lot of emotions in it. good, very good job. keep up!

particle
particle
Electrobel Veteran

well i kind of agree with our dear volture here i think, maybe also some more elements would be welcome to keep some tension, but good concept already! blijve geven!

eeezzeepeezzeee
eeezzeepeezzeee
Electrobel Veteran

aye y alreeady know my comments, very good shit, more structure needed tho and betteren opbouw. g-tar sounds very nice

Rag
Rag
Electrobel Veteran

jip certainly better still i think this song could be much more! nice guitarplay btw;)

HyeVolture
HyeVolture
Electrobel Veteran

really like the electric guitar, is something nice on ebel. cool dark atmosphere, would be cool with some harder drums instead of the trip hop approach, but I'm not a massive attack connaisseur. so personally I would make the drums less "wet", less reverbed and put more drums in it. but then again, if it is trip hop you want to create, I'm not the right person to give advice for this one. certainly thumb up, and I'm curious how this will end!

liquidbass
liquidbass
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nice

Omyiga
Omyiga
Electrobel Veteran

idd, cool sfeertje I ² everyhting that is said ierboven bij hyevolture so don't want to repeat him ;p

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